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Open Poetry #25

Let Down Left Out

Cassie
Junior Member

since 2002-11-12

Posts 32

0 posted 2003-03-09 01:13 AM

Missing out
Leaving you behind

Letting you down
Hearing you cry

I try

I know you just can't wait

Looking forward to seeing me
Looking forward to seeing you

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-03-09 01:50 AM

neat write...thanks for sharing

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-03-09 12:55 PM

Cassie~
A tiny breath of emotion ... delicately exhaled~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-03-09 05:49 PM

Cassie,

This could cover many situations.

Enjoyed.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

4 posted 2003-03-09 06:18 PM

yes... I get lots of images from this. Very nice!

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-03-09 06:55 PM

OOOO.. I love it!

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2003-03-09 07:31 PM

perfectly done!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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