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Pretty Baby |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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In my dream one night I dreamed of our future child The one we will have Many years down the road Hair of black oynx Eyes of brown A smile that would melt anyones heart And turn a bad day around It was like a perfect picture A spitting image of its parents As the dream went on I noticed it was a son That we had People said like father like son So true this was He was like a little miniture Of his own father Then I awoke With a smile on my face Thinking to myself What a pretty baby I would have Even if it is years away Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
may you blessed with a happy family created out of your own dreams?...well we both know that reality has its own designs..so there will be faults along with the blessings  |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
But there will be blessings as well. One has to live by positives to have a good life, that's why I'm happy. I was blessed when I found Julie.  What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Julie and Thundermage...keep a positive outlook and just let your love keep growing. That's what my Love and I do. Since we can't be physically together right now, we do everything we can to build our trust in each other and that makes our love grow even more. We tell each other in letters and phone calls what's going on each day.....and write poems to each other . It really is easier to write your feelings than it is to talk verbally, sometimes...you end up knowing more about each other than most couples who are together every day...... Good luck to you both... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssssss) Oh Julie, I know exactly where are you coming from, I am young too but I too used to dream of a child me and Joanna had before we broke up, a girl with green eyes and brown hair and her first words being "I wuv u!" (wipes tears) I too drea of having a family in the future though of course I won't rush the process, keep nheart to your dreams and they are certain to come true, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, Dreams come true you know. Good write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
one day |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Some dreams are meant to come true Julie. Very well done. |
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