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On the Beach
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On the Beach |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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On the beach We run hand in hand Enjoying the sun And the sand We run from the water And then back in Thinking about the beautiful day It has been He tackles me to the ground As we race down the beach He smiles at me And gives me A kiss I want this day To last forever It was perfect On the beach Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Awwwww, WAS perfect..... nice touch, that! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Julie, this is lovely, sweet friend, I wish I lived right by the ocean and I could go walk barefoot on the warm sand each day! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The beach has many nice advantages. Hopefully no sunburns...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Soft and joyful ..... very enjoyable! Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
julie, i love it when i can read your happier poems. so, in one of your replies to me, you mention a liam. is this the liam that inspired this lovely scene? he he, happy for ya gal, aint love grand! lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
That'd be me.  Julie inspires even warmer thoughts for me.What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
the_loner_23 - a most perfect day on the beach. BC |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
I love the beach, the beautiful sound, and the waves, And the girls..  Its all good though!Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Love it! warm thoughts on such a chilly night! If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
No reason to hope... you just made that day last forever... and a beautiful day it is. |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
I liked this, because when I read it it made me warm...love the beach. Great moment here. Riley Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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DarkSide_Blues Junior Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 41Fl, Usa. |
Eeeh. Poem is nice, but the beach scares me. =/ I'm nearly albino..Between the sun and Jelly fish, it's a death trap for me...*shivers* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I remember days like those |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
It must be nice to live in Florida where the beach is close : ) I wouldn't know! I like this piece very much and I enjoyed reading it, makes me jealous it's not even 30 degrees outside. You're so lucky! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
I love the image...while I am laying on that beach though, JAWS would come drag me back into reality or something... :-) nice job |
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