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Open Poetry #25

Morning Dew (Haiku)

Amature2
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

0 posted 2003-03-07 08:39 AM

Morning Dew

On petals of blue
Caressed by the Morning Dew
Beauty I call you

"This we know - the Earth does not belong to man - man belongs to the Earth." Chief Seattle

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-03-07 08:41 AM

I love that morning dew! It's a delightful, spritely brew!

Have a glorious day!

Earth Angel

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2003-03-07 09:38 AM

Lovely, lovely! Sparkling, glistening dew...a beautiful thing.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2003-03-07 09:50 AM

LOvely morning thoughts. I am just trying some haiku. It's harder to write three lines than six verses of rhyme!
You did a good job of it
Liz

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-03-07 10:46 AM

*s nice
M

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

5 posted 2003-03-07 05:16 PM

Ah, a good senryu.

INclan

rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

6 posted 2003-03-07 05:26 PM

very creative and such great imagery in only 3 lines!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-03-07 05:56 PM

Absolutely beautiful!!!!

Hugs,
Ethel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

8 posted 2003-03-08 03:42 AM

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

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USA

9 posted 2003-03-08 06:59 PM

enjoyed

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2003-03-08 07:05 PM

Just lovely!
Margherita

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2003-03-09 04:29 PM

(smiles) Oh Raphael, this is a beautiful vision, sweet friend, I love the morning dew and that is just one reason spring is my favorite time of year, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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