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A Craving
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A Craving |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I deeply crave your silky touch Your kisses soft Your protective clutch I intensely crave your touching words Your tickling whispers That flitter like a giddy bird. I solely crave your flowing hair Dancing softly across my face You skin that tastes of a pear Your soft, sweet nuzzles Your twirling fingers And your body like a puzzle I miss and crave so much of you Our eyes to mix and create a new hue Blue and hazel swimming brazenly I crave your kindle crazily. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Uh-Huh, I know the feeling myself.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your beautiful romantic words do! (kiss on cheek) May the spirit of true love always sing in your heart, sweet friend, yay, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-08-2003 02:11 PM).] |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Ethel: Yup, I guess we all do some time or another Noah: Thank you! You are so kind and your words I always cherish.  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
so loveydovey, i like it |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sweetly romantic! |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Wow. You have so much love inside you! Love this line.... deeply crave your silky touch Your kisses soft Your protective clutch ~Al |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Yep, felt this, been here. It gets my vote.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are a delightful poet to read. I enjoy your writing and all its charm... Peace & Light, EA |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Aaaaaw Thanks everybody!!!!! You're all so sweet and wonderful!!! ~hugs to all!!!!~ I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
KoKo, there is a lot of love in this  Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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