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Open Poetry #25
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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-02-16 06:51 PM


Expression

Tear filled eyes
Reveal the heartache
Felt inside

Words expressed
With confidence
The pain will soon subside

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Margherita
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1 posted 2003-02-16 07:32 PM

A beautiful expression, containing hope.
Margherita
Ericc
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2 posted 2003-02-17 10:35 AM

Beautiful.
Eric
Bill Charles
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3 posted 2003-02-17 10:43 AM

Amature2 - nice write of inner feelings...

BC
Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2003-02-17 10:43 AM

hope...or a layering of the pain... either way it reads well and it is good.

I enjoyed
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