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Open Poetry #25

Both (part 4 the finish)

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-16 04:54 PM

Both (part 4 the finish)

territory of
my chemical makeup
blushing in
tones of sun
universe of
my elements
today I
find myself
puddled on beach
with both
to be
part of me
unable to choose
in this
two sided
affair between
the land lover
and the
sailing heart

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-02-16 05:00 PM

like this ending as with so many issues and feelings we are left stranded..either unable to resolve the conflicting... or knowing either choice will as well leave us stranded somewhere else...

nicely done... the series does indeed work well

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-02-16 05:11 PM

Nice ending coming full circle to the original. enjoyed this sojourn

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2003-02-16 10:07 PM

Why can't we have a little both anyways, right?

I enjoyed these.

SARCASM BREEDS A BROKEN HEART, and I have enough cracks. Please stop breaking me!

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-02-17 10:33 AM

Concluding in beauty.
Thank you,
Eric

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