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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Humidity Humidity has bogged me down. Set a fog upon my crown. Brought my pores to wheeze for breath. I beg a breeze before my death. It hovers me in frets and sweats. It threatens me in hard begets. IT hangs me like a laundries rope. Dripping time with little hope. There is no air to fair me down I droop and wear to near a clown. My dragon belches vapors dew The hue is but a pink to view. I cannot stand the moldy shroud It hovers like a thundercloud It has the weight of sorrows fate And whispers me that I’m too late. It covers me a state of brine God, I would the sun to shine. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Me too, Seymour!! I do think I see it shining through a little, though...  Hugs, Ethel |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Seymour Tabin../\..i like how you think; enjoyed, much, the poem.. ..Spiros ------------calm------- |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Air is crystal where I live cold the spark, no life to give, yet trill of redbird high on wing, gives hope to Sun, that I would bring a different point of view for you, shall we make tea, from our dew?  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - Your words always bring the sun to me!  Even to-day with its grey skies, warning of a mix of rain and snow. Maybe hot buscuits and honey will help. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! We could use a little humidity here... Sparks shoot off my feet when I walk across the room...lol. Chai tea with my sister's hot buscuits today? ~Morning hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Bravo! A wonderful write my friend! As usual!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, Me too,  Spiros, Thank you my friend. Chris, Hot buscuits and honey always help. hugs, Sy Nancy, I'd be delighted. Hugs Albert, Thank you for the bravo. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--For me, you are like the sun, you shine poetry.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie And you just shine. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, Enjoyed this. It has to be very humid when: "My dragon belches vapors dew The hue is but a pink to view" Love this. Thanks, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My dragon belches vapors dew The hue is but a pink to view. ================================= oh oh...did Randy eat Mexican again? too much chips and beer? No wonder me sweet Stinkylove is in such a foul mood. Tinker needs to fly in with some TLC and raspberry tea and put Sy-babes smile back in place Just how many winkies would you like with your tea?   |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Expressed excellently Seymour yes humidlty can be quite oppressive yet your poem was quite expressive !! Hope P.S hey we are having heatwaves here at the start of autumn , over 100degrees today and the next two days |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, Thank you, your humor is a cool breeze. Hugs JM, As much TLC as I can get and the same on the winkies. WWRS HopeS, Thank you for the wonderful reply and cool breezes ro you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a *winkie* here ... a *winkie* there ... *winkiewinkies* everywhere. and smooches too. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*winkies* to the left ... *winkies* to the right ... *winkies* to tuck you in at night. *winkies* for breakfast ... *winkies* for lunch ... *winkies* that pack a raspberry punch.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*winkies* in red ... *winkies* in blue ... just remember my sweet Sy ... all me *winkies* are for you.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I am over whelmed with winkies, now for the TLC. LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How could I forget the TLC ... oh how silly silly of mothy me. Ok lets see ... where shall we begin ... TLC it will be from your tippy toes to your chinny chin. First I will cook your favorite meal ... how would a Kings dinner make you feel? Then you can sit in your favorite chair ... we'll eat our raspberry desert with out a calorie care. Then I'll bring you your slippers and pipe and I'll hand feed Randy red raspberries ripe.  Next I will rub your tired aching feet ... then read you a poem, would your day be complete? Oh no...not until I sing you a lullaby ... one of butterflies to make you sigh. Then I'll tuck you in and kiss your cheek in goodnight ... then we will start all over when the day dawns its light. So what do think of Tinkers special Sy-guy TLC ... and do you think Isabel's gonna knock the winkies out of me !!  LOL |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) You want humidity, eh? Well, know one thing, NEVER COME TO COLORADO! LOL! (big hugggssssss) Out here there's almost no humidity, nada, nyet, zilch! This is a beautiful write, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, In the beginning God created the end and Shadows of the Rose. And you are that Rose. Noah, You send me some dry and I'll send you some wet. LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and you are the rain that makes the roses grow ... then you are all the colors in the bend of the rainbows. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thank you my Tinkerbell. |
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