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Open Poetry #25

explosive nature poem

etherealdreams
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since 2003-03-04

Posts 2

0 posted 2003-03-07 04:16 AM

as the summers breeze swept through
the trees were cleaned.
silver shadows shook
within their moonlit boundaries.
countless stars create
an incandescent canopy,
that lends its light
for forrest floors to see.

ps. just joking about the title

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2003-03-07 11:31 AM

silver shadows shook
within their moonlit boundaries.
countless stars create
an incandescent canopy,
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this is lovely surreal and celestial imagery
which lives up to your pen name...also noted it your alliterations and assonance. You should give this poem a title that does it's beauty justice.
Welcome to poetry land etherealdreams.
nice to have you here with us.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-03-08 04:03 PM

ethereal - very nice indeed - yes I agree - this deserves a title worth the words within xxoo

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