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Living Out My Dream
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Living Out My Dream |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Picture by Alan Ayers * * * * I admit I had a crush on you From the first time that we met The way you looked at me Is something I cannot forget Your eyes were warm and friendly Such a deep and vivid green How lost in love was I As I was living out my dream So much time we've spent together Since that unforgettable day I never entertained the notion That with me you'd want to stay These memories I'll always cherish You're now my lover and my friend And like the finest of all coffees We remain the perfect blend * * * * "If I never met him I would have dreamed him into being" I am in motion |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue...and I love the post script. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, this is great and I love the p.s. Hugs to you and Andrew. Marti |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We should all live our dreams...james |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, so very, very beautiful  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Sue, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, and yes, love will always exist in dreams whatever happens therefore love must exist and can come true with your golden heart believing it, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is precious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - I like this very much, and like your words of romance, my vote for this... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mmmm, i like the feel of this...wonderfully romantic! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Nice poem and clever too! Thanks for sending the link. Betty Lou Hebert |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is lovely, Sue...both in thought and verse.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very sweet *s I smiled at this: "And like the finest of all coffees We remain the perfect blend" hope you are doing well *s hugs M |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
We may not all have such memories, but those of us who do are the lucky ones. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so beautiful, and romantic. [This message has been edited by SmartChick (03-09-2003 08:40 PM).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sigh....very romantic.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I know this well. *S* And it's as beautiful to live as it is to read. *S* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sue - this is lovely! Good for you! "If I never met him I would have dreamed him into being" How romantic - nice write indeed xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-18-2003 01:23 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Hi Sue, this is truly lovely.  |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Sue! This is so sweet and romantic!! I really love it. I'm not only voting for it, I'll add it to my library...  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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