Open Poetry #25 |
If All My Wishes Could Come True |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~* If All My Wishes Could Come True *~ If all my wishes could come true when I wished for anything, I’d wish to see each human smile and light to this darkness bring. I’d wish to heal all hearts in pain, and hold every, single lonely hand. I’d wish for total harmony, and peace throughout this land. I’d wish everyone knew his name, and never, ever would forget. They’d think of him in reverence when they see the day's sun set. Each person filled with hate I’d wish them one perfect dream. To those so hard on themselves, I’d wish some solid self-esteem. I'd wish that every wish tonight made upon a shooting star would come true for everyone, being part of their memoir. I'd wish that all lonely people walking along the streets today, Find someone to share their life with, loving them until their dying day. I’d wish there always be rainbows and brilliant stars up in our sky, I’d wish everyone we love were safe, but should they leave we can say goodbye. And, finally, I'd wish that all the hate be extinguished by his love. I wish that evil finally surrenders And bows to the almighty above. I’d wish these things sincerely, but our lives can only be determined by those wishes that we make become our reality. ~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so beautiful and very very true Sharon! Much enjoyed the thoughts herein.. There is much here for many to ponder... You have such a loving heart. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mysteria - I wish all of them would come true... BC |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Mysteria, these wishes are so needed right now, in these times of trouble. I have wished the same things, many times, but my main wish is for them all to become reality, as you said. What a wonderful and insightful poem this is...a true gem. Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
These are wonderful wishes, Sharon. And, I would wish these, too. [This message has been edited by SmartChick (02-15-2003 09:43 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, I noticed all the wishes were for others. Not even one litle one for youself. So I'll wish a wish for you. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (02-15-2003 10:45 PM).] |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
beautifully written mysteria. I pray these wishes come true for all. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
wonderful wishes and I also wish for these wishes to become reality. aloha and hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Sharon, that is exactly why I have been so passionate about peace lately, it saddens me to see war being considered when I feel it would only create so much more violence and feel this could be the fuel for World War III if our leaders can't give it up! (sad sigh) I too wish for this ever so much, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful write from a beautiful lady [This message has been edited by passing shadows (02-16-2003 02:25 AM).] |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Mysteria~ I sure like how you wish. I believe most all of us here wish for the same as you. How wonderful the world would be If we all could live in harmony A perfect place for all to see A wish A prayer A plea for all humanity Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (02-16-2003 01:58 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My dear friend......amen...... oh how I wish you would submit this for the new book....it belongs there. I must have had my momma's will |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Such beautiful wishes for all humanity.... I wish the same...and all your wishes, too, sweet Sharon.... "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-15-2003 10:51 PM).] |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
IF I COULD HAVE A WISH I WOULD WISH THAT "YOUR" WISHES Would come true! Simply moving! Thank you! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thank you kindly for reading this poem. I wrote it at a time when we need some wishes to come true. I forgot to tick the box that says it is for the book submission so if you did by any chance come back to read and feel like voting that would be so nice, thank you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mysteria - a tick a tock, this poem for the book... BC |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So glad that you checked the lil box lady....now heres my vote!! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
You have some world class wishes here dear lady. I will stand with you and hold your hand and pray all your wishes come true. Huggles and luvs, Marti 'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.' |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thanks kindly everyone I appreciate your reading this, and let's start wishing okay? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very beautiful! *S* I'll wish with you. *S* |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Catching up on the best... Thank you for bring Passions to this site! |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
You dream of what been on your mind mostly through the day, or even some people say that your dreams are all part of the futer.. .. Nicley written poem. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
If anyone can make their wishes come true, it's you.. Mysterias one... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sharon, And your wishes have been reality in my life. For which, I will always be grateful. Bless you and here's my vote. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Boootieful! Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I’d wish everyone we love were safe, but should they leave we can say goodbye." ...me too... loved this |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I'd wish for lazer guns instead of hands. Heh, just kidding. You're quite the altruistic one, aren't you? This is sweet, but know that wishes don't just come true... we have to make them come true, and what changes we can make in our short lives will inspire the hearts of others to carry on our ideals in generations thereafter. It's the ripple effect... all it takes is a little action for all your wishes to come true, even if you're not alive to see them. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
giving you a star to wish upon " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon-- |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I wish that you all get your wishes coming true for you, and thank you so kindly for reading my little poem I submitted. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Mysteria....this is a keeper. I wish these things too. I wish things seemingly sooo simple weren't so hard for us to achieve. You write of truth and things everyone in this world desperatly needs!!!! LOVELY!!!! Bridgette |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A lovely wish from a loving heart. Joyce |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah, Sharon. A mixture of wishes, dreams, and reality. Closing my eyes and wishing here as well. This is just lovely, my friend. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Your tender heart is genuinely expressed here I believe as I too share in these your wishes. Set apart from the many more complicated poems that I have read, I love the simplicity here in this poem and I think it would compliment the book very nicely. -Bob |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mysteria - I pray your wishes do come true, my vote for you... BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I think if we all try really hard to be the best we can be to ourselves and each other anything is possible thank you folks for your kind replies. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is so lovely, Mysteria. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Let those wishes shine on Mysteria, my vote is cast and the best to you |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wish on you two - it sure doesn't hurt! I thank you kindly for reading as well. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Of all human emotions, sincerity is one of our most honorable. You show it so clearly in wishes we need every day. Great job. Ken J Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
How your heart overflows with love...and the world would be a glorious place if all hearts were such as yours! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
KenJay finally I know you are male - and I love your poetry so I thank you for this compliment. Ellie - You also spread your little love light well - thank you. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful heartfelt wishes, Sharon! You have a heart of gold, that's clear to see! It was great to talk with you last night on the phone! I hope my accent wasn't too disconcerting! Yours was lyrical, by the way! eh?! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lyrical - me! I love the idea of being lyrical and that is a poem right there Denise. Thank you for reading my poem I appreciate it. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ah...wish away, Sharon...and may they all come true. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You know the real beauty of this poem?? It's because I know you mean every word!! You are special, lady |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Blessed You! It cheers me up. I'm one of the lonely and low self-esteem lost folks. Thanks so much ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Michael, I started early with wishing on a star, and graduated to wishing on anything. I even wish for you to get "hole in ones" or is that "holes in one" aries_luv_ppl it is for you I wish the hardest and the most often then. May you see light in your darkness, and a smile tomorrow that warms your soul. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sharon...here's wishing all your wishes come true |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ruth - wish with me and watch the changes we can make - thanks sweetie, it was nice talking to you at Liz's. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Munda coming from you I thank you kindly. |
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