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kaile
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0 posted 2003-03-07 07:24 AM

the teacher
chose to ignore
the strategic-placed notes
underneath my chair

i narrowly escaped cheating

I would be quite shaken
but I had to smile
when I thought
hey, maybe that's what
Cupid is doing with us,
you Goddess exemplified,
me a commoner bluffing up to catch up
© Copyright 2003 heng kaile - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-07 07:27 AM

ah.... it is amazing is it not, how we can feel such a fraud..when we think someone or something is beyond what we deserve...

enjoyed this..the set up lines in the beginning leading to another parrallel thought drawn to an end....with a bit of insightful wisdom..

I think you not... the cheat here..

Enjoyed...
regards2you
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2 posted 2003-03-07 07:46 AM



Kaile,

A commoner? That will never happen.


Enjoyed,

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"
Duncan
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3 posted 2003-03-07 09:15 PM

'you Goddess exemplified,
me a commoner bluffing up to catch up'

Brought back something I said myself once...had to smile at the memory.  Cool title too.      
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4 posted 2003-03-07 09:17 PM

Oh wow!  Much enjoyed this write Kaile!!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~
Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-03-07 09:31 PM


Not a common[er] cheater at all...
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-03-07 09:57 PM

You have what it takes to pass any test!--in love and in the classroom!

Warm hugs,
EA
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Gaia
7 posted 2003-03-08 12:34 PM

OK, but is she poetic?
LOL, doesn't mattter though. I bow to commoners, didn't you know that? Or at least tip my hat.
Who says 'cheaters' never win.  


passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-03-08 02:11 AM

wonderful thoughts
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9 posted 2003-04-04 03:17 PM

Nice!
Mon Cherie
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10 posted 2003-04-28 09:30 AM

Uh... Can't really pinpoint which part I like... It's the overall effect that impresses me... Very well-written!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence
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