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etherealdreams New Member
since 2003-03-04
Posts 2 |
this life sublime within and inbetween itself reveals its rhythmic phases as the clock winds down again flaunting staunch repercussions for actions shadowing misgivings the medium is key lets waste not the hour for ours are surrounded with a certain sanctity from allies to foes to piteous rivals overthrown we can seek the secrets soon enough this puzzle with its ins and outs renders ground for well rounded people to place their pieces complacently |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethereal, there is a lot more in this piece that first hits the eye...if one reads slowly, it hits the soul...very good! Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Wonderful first piece. Welcome to Passions!!!!! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Welcome to Passions!!!! A very, very good write. I lok forward to reading more... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome to PIP. I enjoyed your first post and hope to read more of your work.... Ethel.....garysgirl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A very well written first post, I enjoyed it. Welcome to Passions! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sad sigh) There is obviously no complacency going on right now, we might as well omit that word from our vocabularies until we finally wise up and realize exactly how we should be, this is a powerful debut, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
strong first post! fitting sentiment for the land of 'Passions' Rf |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ethereal - nice writing - excellent wording here - Welcome to PIP! xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perfectly done! |
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