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Beauty Eyes
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Beauty Eyes |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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Beauty eyes Dancing across the floor, Looking good Leave me wanting more Can never see you in the light of day Can never love you Can't you see You're my Beauty eyes You're my fantasy, Just a fantasy Beauty eyes Hair flowing long Loving you How can that be wrong Can't you see what you mean to me Can you see me Hear me when I say You're my beauty eyes You're my fantasy, Just a fantasy Beauty eyes Falling in too deep Lying next to me Love as strong as the sea When I wake up you're still not mine Baby, why can't you Be what I need You're my beauty eyes You're my fantasy, Just a fantasy |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Fantasy through miracle fades gracefully.. into reality! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ringo, I like that fantasy very often turns into reality....  Hugs, Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed this one, I could hear it as a song. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A fantasy can become a reality! Keep that thought! ~ May your pleasant dreams come to reflect your reality! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Thanks for all the kind words... Actually, Pilgrimage, It is a song... kind of... The band I am in is working on a concept album and this is one of the songs... almost |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nothing wrong with a fantasy - sometimes even better than the real thing, real thing gets boring |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ringo - I love this! Is passionate and so very true - nice writing there xxoo lol @ Michele |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Bradly Fantasy or not, this was fabulous and I really enjoyed it. "Love...... to melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night." Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ringo - nice write, liked the beauty eyes tied in with a fantasy... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write... |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Very lyrical, if I had a shred of musical talent I would be tempted to put music to it. Much enjoyed. |
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