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Dance of the Ghost-Lit Candle
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Dance of the Ghost-Lit Candle |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Dance of the ghost-lit candle breathless flicker slipping through an open window the spring brook sings a lullaby distance coyote's moaning cry my heart away far away from home i think, your eyes wide open catching pulse of this light i send you warm colors till cold hands cover absent you, I resign to monochrome Rf |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
mmmmmmmmm very nice...helen |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful missing of special one, Robert...much enjoyed! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh yes, Robert....I know the feeling very well of missing a loved one. My daughter and my fiance and I don't live in the same town. He is closer than she is, though. A very good right, Sir.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'absent you, I resign to monochrome' I like that.  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very nice, I really enjoyed this write. Simple, yet compelling. Enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RobertFrazier~ I had such a myriad of thoughts while reading this piece. I'll be back to try to figure out what it wants me to really hear~ There's a layer of word-thoughts just waiting to be unearthed~ Excellent when a poem can give me this kind of feeling~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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