Open Poetry #25 |
Twist the world |
rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England |
Yeah lets twist this whole world around Now it’s not about falling It’s about picking yourself up And throwing yourself at everything Nothing brings no one down And you can forever wear your crown No one can take anything away This is happiness This is living at it’s best Following nothing and no one Relying only on yourself Dependencies lifted from you You rise as if weightless Higher than the clouds Higher than the sky Drift from one day to the next Oblivious to the rest Everyone living the same Equality of pain but smiles the same No one has more than anyone else No one need take from what’s not their own Because we all have what we need We all have our own home Space to occupy yourself And no one is in bad health Love isn’t needed when you love yourself But it’s gained from trust and appreciation Getting to know people takes time But you can tell one thing for sure Before you even open the door No one is bad No one is wrong There’s just differences in opinion Differences in the ways we were brought up Your threshold of pain is only as big as you’ve learnt to cope with But if we all have the same Then we will understand each other’s pain Life isn’t hard There will only be dark When you choose to fall to the other side But don’t worry There’s always a place to hide Just go inside Of yourself. small insignificant useless me |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really like this. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
interesting ride, my eyes just kind of slid on down. -majnu |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Interesting.....and very good!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I usually am unabld to get into the long ones (short attention span, and all), yet this one kept me to the end and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Marvelous write. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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