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her eyes are puddles
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her eyes are puddles |
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noah j Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 82on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair |
her eyes are puddles i stare into for hours for the me i see in them is a beautiful creation that is made again and again everytime i see my reflection the puddle appeared on a rainy day but unlike a puddle it did not go away when the sunlight came out to play in fact it seems my puddle keeps the rain away |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
So much feeling here. Great poem!Eric |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This piece is so full of beauty |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Truly a sweet poem. ~ May the puddles never dry up... Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Oh Noah, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, it made me cry because I know this gorgeous vision in my dreams ever so well and how that love always winks at me and how I desire to hold loves hand! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Noah, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
for the me i see in them is a beautiful creation that is made again and again Noah, you sure are narcissus, aren't you? just kidding, lovely thoughts here, i enjoy and add my vote...  welcome to passions by the way |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is such a wonderful poem, thank you for sharing it with us |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned...enjoyed the read. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
loved this...short and sweet |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very sweet poem. It has my vote. "Love makes the world go around" |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
This is a good poem it got my vote Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I really enjoyed this.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
noah - this is just lovely . . . xxoo good luck! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
You have my vote I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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