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sugar mountain |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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how long the wait, to hold again, if only for a while, to sweetly tuck into memory for safekeeping, to call upon, some empty winter night, when all alone and self absorbed, alienation by choice, as of late,desperately seeking more time on her own, despite the warmth of heart and home, just needing a thread to hang onto, to weave a bit of dreaming into this unfulfilled heart, spring comes with the next moon, blossoms will appear, soothing aching limbs, welcoming back home both sleeping flower and song, if only to sit upon them for a little while, the season shortly consummated, in a blink, over too soon after reaching peak, vanishing along with those that came before, sadness surrounds the bud on the rose, visualizing its birth, lamenting its death, concurrently, before its first petals even fully open, watching my seeds grow in front of my eyes, still cannot surmise, how they've come from cradle, to standing eye to eye with me, right here and now, i feel the whispering of love again, hesitant to let it touch down, fearing its final chapters before the story even begins, i gather up rose petals to soften my fall [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-06-2003 10:35 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I loved the imagery. Awesome work. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
inked - "so sad, the bud on the rose, visualizing its birth, lamenting its death concurrently, before its first petals even fully open," ahh this is haunting - lovely and "i feel the coming of love again, hesitant to let it touch down, fearing its final chapters before the story even begins i gather rose petals to cradle my fall" we all tread hesitantly now - dont we? This was beautiful - again - I sense your motherhood shining through your trials - excellent xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's some sugar, sugar! Just a thread to hang onto!!! I like that. What is wrong with your email? huh huh? You can drop me a line at (let me pick one out of my hat...lol) seasidelady2@aol.com~~~ if you feel like it. Loved your poem girlie~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-06-2003 01:01 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
blues, maybe that explains the missing love letters not coming these days!!!!! ill try u instead,thanks, thanks loner again for your nice words, little wing, thanks for really reading, not skimming, im guilty of that sometimes, just rushing through.......  |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Wow....you painted such a nice picture with words. I can see everything so clearly in my mind. This was really nice Michele. You never fail to amaze me. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This piece is my favorite by you. Your imagery was very well done! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love your style! It's like I'm in freefall and I'm flooded with a variety of images and emotions as I fall to earth---thanks for the rose petals--they softened the landing! Have a day full of joyous happenings! EA |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love cookies! ARCTIC WIND |
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