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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-02-14 09:04 PM

over the sky,
to a blind heart,
never seen,
where sunrise
and sunset
run free
through this dream,
fascination's
sensation,
running wild
imagination,
sweet jubilation,
one toke past,
glorious
intoxication

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-14 09:39 PM

very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2003-02-14 10:08 PM

Yes, and this was truly intoxicating!! I enjoyed the pace here, as it started my mind moving from the very beginning...Great write!

A truly happy person is one who
can enjoy the scenery on a detour!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-02-15 03:22 AM

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-02-15 03:51 AM

Pour it on Inky~

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

5 posted 2003-02-15 01:59 PM

I always enjoy poetry that soars with emotion.

Well done.
Sunkissed.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2003-02-15 02:41 PM

inkedgoddess - glorious intoxication, love those two words...

BC

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

7 posted 2003-02-15 08:01 PM

That was really nice and clean too....refereshing! Hope you had a nice holiday

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

8 posted 2003-02-15 08:18 PM

I believe this is my first read of yours. I look forward to much much more!! This was simply beautiful!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-02-15 08:39 PM

Michele, I liked this......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2003-02-15 10:45 PM

one toke over the line sweet jesus
one toke over the line

Shadowed_Innersense
Junior Member

since 2001-12-05

Posts 49
somewhere at the edge

11 posted 2003-02-24 02:12 PM

Fascinating!!!
... need more, got the munchies now.

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