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Heart Felt
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Heart Felt |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Heart Felt eyes down you whisper deep secrets from foamed salty brook pointing out each scar did you think I would not touch as I looked "Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future." |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
I likey. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodness, Helen, you do these good.... saying so much in such few words..  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... a tender feel to this...and again in so few words you capture a great deal for the reader to build around. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Touching... Very nice...  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
you're kicking ass lately helen! keep it up lady! lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Helen - this is lovely - how you get so much feeling into so few words is a miracle xxoo |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Again, I follow littlewing after she steals my response. I like this much, good work, Helen |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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