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Snow Whisper
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Snow Whisper |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Snow falls gently to ground as whispered breaths in nape of neck a beautiful promise that only melts away with time |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
uh......wow |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
succinct, subtle, sensual, ... stunning. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
swooooooon.  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thank you kindly, Dixie, JM and Gemma Raph |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
now this seems sad to me... as it melts away in time M |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i was kind of surprised cause it started out sounding so sweet and light, but then, you had to do it, didnt u? u couldnt resist going for the jugular could u? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
As always beautiful Raph - snow melts but returns each season - so sweet - so painful xxoo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
And that is why I reside in sunny Florida..damn snow always melting away. I enjoyed the ride of sweet sorrow. Susan |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice one Raph... and so true the fading of each... enjoyed |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks for the reply nakd Mish what can i say you know i can't resist thanks sue bittersweet life is.. Lucky you Susan I don't mind the promises fading so much as the latter |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph I had to go back to this - bittersweet yes always - the latter doesnt have to fade sweety - or the promises . . . I have learned much from you already sweety |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I liked it, I don |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
Kool!!! >>phantom poet<<< |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Sue Wind Vandana Phantom appreciate the replies. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You have many facets to your writing, Raph... and this is one of the more exquisite of them... Thank you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I liked this, Raph. Only one thing, though...promises do stay solid without melting, sometimes.....  Hugs, Ethel |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Raph, Very nice, indeed. Liked this a lot. Such talent. Enjoyed, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sunshine thank you for the compliment Ethel sometimes yes..i guess..i dunno Pat i really appreciate that thank you very much |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
melting .... snow ....and whispers.... love how that works in your words.... L~ Take me where the tides start |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
too kind ~R |
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