Open Poetry #25 |
Touch of Midnight |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Surround yourself in the celestial scent of sweetest coastal sage and the essence of ancient yew, as I touch the innermost spirit, the deepest heart and soul of you, within the coolness of an ocean breeze, feel the moist sand as you kneel on your knees, hear the whispered wind as it sings through the trees, feel the warmth of the earth in a golden sunset, it's a heavenly sensation you'll never forget. Feel the touch of magic in midnight and spend your moments in never regret. And remember to think of me. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (03-05-2003 12:56 AM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I always think of you, and your beautiful words............at midnite. Jason |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Midnite - God this is amazing - I love your writing - it just sings . . . xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty cool! |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
That last line seems to come from no where... yet the poem is incomplete without it. Another amazing write from an amazing talent. |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Ain't no mojo strong enough to dim the magic of passions resident shaman. Or would that be a shawoman???Enjoyed Kacy ,even if it's only 11:15 here. Live like it's your last day... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Jason, in a morning blush, thank you. littlewing, what a sweet reply. Thank you so much. Dixie, glad you enjoyed this midnight poem. Ringo, yes it's an intentional afterthought, like leaving you with the last fading light you hold onto that carries you from dusk to midnight. Thank you for your time and reply. Ray, LOL "shawoman." You are making up new words again, and leaving me with a big morning smile, bent ku style. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (03-05-2003 11:39 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes!! i feel it too!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Michelle, smiling here in thanks. Hope this helps you in your stressful moments. (maybe like a mini-vacation?) |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
i agree with littlewing. this almost seems like a song you want to sing to an old tune, down at the beach. -majnu |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Smooth...James |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Lovely Midnitesun! ARCTIC WIND |
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