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Butterfly Girl |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 art by sunny Butterfly girl, with your head in the clouds and a glass of love's nectar at hand Gossamer wings gently flow in the breeze in your own secret fairytale land... Your beckoning gaze reaches out to the sky where your butterfly prince there awaits In graceful smooth flight, he approaches your smile Will you welcome his love, deemed by Fate? One kiss from your lips is the secret wherein all the boundaries are broken this night 'Twill open the doors to a love that will last through eternity's endless delight... Butterfly girl, with your head in the clouds and your hand holding onto your dreams Take flight with your heart, never questioning why Love is sometimes as sweet as it seems... Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Sunnyone, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your gorgeous words do! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have my flittering vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Beautiful post - gets my vote for sure. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Sunnyone, very good I really liked it Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
I really like the last line! "Love is sometimes as sweet as it seems..." The whole thing's beautiful, and it has my vote! Wonderful write. That's what we, as heroes, do. We live as if the world were like it should be, to show the world what it could be. |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
good work. Love the last line, love can seem to good to be true. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Love the poem..love the graphics!  |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
sensory overload! gorgeous pic - wonderful poem! i didn't know what to absorb first - great post! -majnu |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
A beautiful submission, my vote for sure. Jason |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sunny, this is so beautiful. Though I love it all, you know I like the last line best.... "Love is sometimes as sweet as it seems". Oh yes, it certainly is.  Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-05-2003 01:53 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 NICE! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Noah, and I love your pic too!! Thank you so much!! Hi Carol, and thank you, as the pleasure is in sharing here!! Hi Amara, and nice to meet you!! I do appreciate your vote, and am glad you liked it!! Hi rkcraig, and yes...that last line can be taken several different ways...(I was glad my muse came up with it!!!) Thank you! Hi PdV, I'm just learning about graphics, but I love it!! Thank you for appreciating my early efforts in that field!!! Hi majnu, and it's ok to overload now and then!!! Kinda gives your muse new ideas!! Thank you so much, my friend! Hi Jason, and vote accepted with much thanks! Glad you liked this!!!! Hi Ethel, and yes, as a matter of fact, you and your love crossed my mind after I typed in the last line!!! Thank you so much! Hi passing shadows, and it's good to have your thoughts here...thank you!!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh I am so pleased I found this gem! Wonderful..much enjoyed! ~Smiles across the pond~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your words have a way of fluttering across the page so gracefully. Absolutely gorgeous Sunnyone~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunnyOne~ Hey gal ! Nice to see this beauty from you~ 'never questioning why Love is sometimes as sweet as it seems...' Lots of thought in this ... yes, indeed~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
One kiss from your lips is the secret wherein all the boundaries are broken this night 'Twill open the doors to a love that will last through eternity's endless delight... ================================= beautiful...rhymes divine and a lovely accent pic...very cool. Well done Sunny...a lovely write to reflect you in the book |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
Very breathtaking!!!! >>phantom poet<<< |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Enchantress, and I got the smiles from way over there!!! Thank you so much, and glad you found it, too! Hi BluesSerenade!! I always wondered as a kid what it would be like to be a butterfly! My imagination hasn't grown up yet!! LOL!! Thank you for your wonderful reply...it's very appreciated! Hi Marge...oh, my good friend, you know that I am inspired by the beauty of your work, and that's the truth!!! Thank you so much for stopping by...that is special to me!! Hi Janet Marie, and I've been doing some work on stabalizing my meter! As a musician, I sometimes wander when I write lyrics, and it doesn't make sense if you don't hear the notes. So, thank you, as it is nice to know that my efforts may be paying off in writing regular poetry. I do appreciate your coming by, and your nice reply!! Hi Phantom Poet, and I enjoyed your reply too! I was hoping it would have a sort of breathtaking feel to it, so thank you!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Oh is my granddaugther ever going to love this one! I printed it out for her little book, hope you don't mind. Lovely fantasy. I enjoyed the rhyme as you don't do that a great deal too often. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (03-08-2003 05:34 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Butterfly girl, with your head in the clouds and your hand holding onto your dreams Take flight with your heart, never questioning why Love is sometimes as sweet as it seems... Loving this! art by sunny- is that you? It's beautiful. as were your words. this is going into my library, as well as the book. lots of love, gemma xxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Mysteria, and no, I don't mind a bit, in fact I'm very honoured that you would choose it for your grandaughter!! Thank you..(my grandaughter has a copy of this one, too!) Hi Vandana, and so glad to see you here! Thank you...I love getting your replies!! Hi Gemma, and yes, that's me. I'm a novice at computer art, but I love playing with it, as the colours and movements are so much fun! Thank you, and am really glad that you enjoyed this enough for your library!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Butterfly girl....I like the concept, and admire the execution! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Magic....lovely painting too hon..... Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunnygirl...please send me a copy of the full size of this art...I would love to see it in close up...I enjoyed the thoughts that went with this painting...it is so you...thank you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Doubtless good advice for the hesitant for what is there if not love? |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Ratleader, and many thanks!! Hi Lauren, and glad I could share this with you!! Thanks!! Hi Sunshine, and an email is flitting it's wings toward you as we speak...hope it gets there ok, and thanks!! Hi passing shadows!! And thank you for the piggy back ride!! Hi RSW, and I agree 100%!! Love is all you need, and thank you!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (03-11-2003 02:25 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a lovely presentation! *S* Art and words weave a beautiful whole... well done! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautifully penned, enjoyed this treat very much Charisma |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi suthern! Thank you, and I appreciate your words of reply today!!! Hi Charisma! So glad you did enjoy this one, as it was fun to put together! Thank you! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enchanting... Peace & Light, EA |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
As I read this I can picture your words blending with the art Nice Thomas |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is beautiful. I'm with majnu, I don't know what to absorb first, the words or the pic. Both are truly splendid! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sunnyone This was absolutely beautiful and so very well written. Here is a little something for you : "Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly may alight upon you." Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sunny - goodness I just love this - (littlewings myself here) you penned it perfectly - reminds of a song . . . xxoo |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi EA, and thank you!!! Every butterfly delights in peace and light!!! Hi Thomas, and thank you too! Yes, the art manifested itself first, and the words wrote to the artwork... Hi White Rose, and just absorb any way that you feel comfortable with. To me, poetry is an individual art, both for the giver and the reader. Thank you my friend! Hi Sue, and that was a beautiful thought!!! Thank you for such a nice reply!! Hi littlewing, and it may very well turn into a song, as that is what I do for my main income. Thank you so much for being here today! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ah Sunny ~ You have brushed some lovely images with your poets pen here ~ So so beautiful ~ Bonnie |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
A perfect love poem....  ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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