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Until The End Of Time
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Until The End Of Time |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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Until the end of time When the rivers cease to flow And the flowers do not grow I will love you As long as the heavens Rain down upon the Earth And young lovers gaze above I will love you But Time will not allow us to forever To continue as we have Therecomes a time When each of us must die As long as there are children A red sunset to be seen And a memory to hold onto I will love you man.. from sad to sap... I must really be pathetic!! lol |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OMG stopppppppppppppp - Gods Green Earth - I know how you feeeel - aghhhh - ok - WOW - this one hit home - breathe . . . hehehe xxoo |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hi Bradly There's nothing pathetic about these words. I really enjoyed your thoughts and I'll look forward to reading more. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
No, sue... not the words... just me lmao Thanks for then replies |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We should all be so pathetic...to feel as such. Wonderful! Eric |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
No, Bradley....being a hopeless romantic is certainly not pathetic......if so, there sure are a lot of us around here.....LOL I loved this poem....write more!  Hugs, Ethel |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Well done |
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