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Death's Door
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Death's Door |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
~A Nightmare I once had for a week straight~ DEATH'S DOOR I hold the hand of death and stand before him in judgement. I am led through the halls of my eternal stay. I see those whom I've known before, among the wickedness of this place. Their voices surround me, piercing my brain. They scream out the sins of my youth without cease. Have i lived life in torment, So that I may be tormented in death? I sheild my ears from them, but they linger in my head, as if they were my own. The hall is long and without end. My body boils with each passing step. I cannot breath, for the blackness in the air is thickening. The voices now seem to be scolding me. Vicious and cold are their words, Drudging up emotions within me, That I've never before experienced. I stand fast in hopes to stop the circling. I become light and without feeling. The sensation's unlike numbness, I am now scared. Am I gone? Or just now, starting to slip into my sleep? Before me, a room which is blackened without view. The stentch of dead heated flesh, in the air. I am guided through the door. As I step through the mouth of the room, My skin grows like ice. The door is shut.... And the voices still taunt me in the dark. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
That is scary. Good write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
THANK YOU!!!! Not as scary as being the one in the dream....whew! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Albert, I send many healing angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, know all will be alright as there are always angel sguiding you who will help you find the light and hear the canon! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I have been here too, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Albert - wow, not a good dream for sure... BC |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
If Hamlet was right, and it is better "to take arms against a sea of troubles, And by opposing end them" ... Then you shall have no troubles this night, my friend. A very well written look into your fears. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
spooky  |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you ALL dear friends for your kind words! No more fears  |
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