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Crazy Love |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Please, no one get excited, this is no way a reflection on me. Just writing... Crazy Love (3/4/03) I have bled scarlet words Of woe For you I have swallowed back Boulder sized rocks of humiliation For you I have beat fist against chest Trying to start a dying heart Because of you I have self-mutilated My now weeping soul Because of you I have broken every nail Trying to scratch all traces of you From my skin To rid myself of you And now, I hand you my Heart, soul, and sanity You own them all…. Now love me |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Susan - brilliant! WOW - Oh my - this is brilliant - I love it - like Billy Holiday - "All of Me" - . . . now love me - excellent - wish I created this xxoo |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
You must have been looking through your crystal ball at my life. What was the line? "Strumming my life with her fingers, telling my life with her words"?? A very moving write. I highly suggest you consider it for the book. Congrats |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This is so so brilliant. When you fall in love this is what happens it takes over everything which is why it hurts so much when that love fades away. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wow, thank you both. Susan |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Dan! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
still like this |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This does sound a little crazy...James |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
up cause I like it |
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