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Open Poetry #25

Spring (Haiku)

Amature2
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since 2001-01-08

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0 posted 2003-03-04 08:07 AM

Spring

Gentle soothing rain
Replenishing Mother Earth
A new seed gives birth

"This we know - the Earth does not belong to man - man belongs to the Earth." Chief Seattle

[This message has been edited by Amature2 (03-04-2003 08:13 AM).]

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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Lurking

1 posted 2003-03-04 08:26 AM

I'm not very good with haiku but I really enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2003-03-04 09:28 AM

succinctly said, yet vivid, the last line is definitely spring as are all, but the "new seed," yep that's the epitome!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-03-04 02:44 PM

Amature Bravo! In college hehehe - I couldnt write haiku for anything - my words are oftentimes quite depressing - my teacher said to me, "Haiku is meant to be happy Sue - not sad." Hehehe - takes a gift to do this and you have done it quite well xxoo

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2003-03-04 07:03 PM

This is refreshing. Enjoyed.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

5 posted 2003-03-04 07:11 PM

Nice haiku! I love this form. The spring imagery you've gifted us is refreshing.

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