A dramatic dialogue between dishwashers and olympic dishwashers.

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Open Poetry #25

A dramatic dialogue between dishwashers and olympic dishwashers.

carbuncle o blivion
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since 2003-03-11

Posts 1
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0 posted 2003-03-11 11:14 PM

i don't know!!

you're a loser, can't belive you're
DOOOING this!

all interesting and, unusual
come on. no more of this.

now i know how come you get so mad
i feel it in the bones of me
you drive me to my saddest sad
and oh i feel so bad
when i am mad oh no!

kiss kiss kiss

how do you spell a kiss when it makes noise
you're bad boys.

and all around the bay they say
swish swish swish
and kiss kiss kiss
no more of this
you're bad boys.

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

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Texas, USA

1 posted 2003-03-11 11:37 PM

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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2 posted 2003-03-11 11:53 PM

(giggles in delight) Must we add another rhymtic dancing-related event to the Olympics, as if we don't have enough already? LOL! This is a wonderful debut filled with onomatopoeia, sweet friend, tsk tsk tsk, how wishy-washy the laundry can be sometimes! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspire dby your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!