Open Poetry #25 |
They are Gone .... from a Sunday, long ago.... |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
They Are Gone it has been said he left, as did she and they might have taken a slight sabbatical for a little while but they left their soft smiles I know because I've been to the archives which can, in itself, this word "archive" be a lovely word or a dank word depending on what is in its hold and what it is holding but these archives are delicious and nutritious and sustaining of all that I seek their smiles…and everything else they left behind so do not chide me nor deride me for the time I spend in here, letting it all sink in again and again their words of passion of heartbreak and surcease, of love and light of misery and hope of misguided thoughts and wars well won and wars duly lost of spirits and spiritual love of planes and substances untouchable but all of which are left readable their words sustain my soul and the tiniest, most miniscule thoughts were planted in my brain because of their words which someone did not leave unheard but rather, read and enjoyed, even if only by One… that One person captured a piece of the writer, the poet, the author that One person went away or stayed because of that writer, poet, author and forevermore shall remember or if not actually remember, still, will have been touched, just once by the Passion of the Person, Poet, Painter of Promise. so on this very holy day a day of rest a morning come early with soft electrical candle's light and if fortunate, then on into the night I shall visit and reacquaint myself with friends who are on sabbatical, but visit them I shall in the archives. ~*~ A repost, for a very special moth... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is very beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
God bless that very special Moth for encouraging you to repost this piece. Not only is it incredibly poetic, it truly shows your love for poetry and for those who write it. Their words are not forgotten by you and you help keep them alive. I suppose this should call for some "self love" on your part...for you have enriched those archival works with those of your own! Karilea, you--and your poetry--are VERY special. Warm hugs, EA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this much |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Karilea... I took love to meander through the Archives.. Please thank the moth who requested this repost. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--I know what you mean so beautifully. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
This is so pretty always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I miss them too. Evey time someone is gone for a while, I amm afraid they won't come back. It's like they die, and all that is left are the memories. Thanks Sunshine. the Wind is invisible. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
So soft and lovely. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Lovely indeed. |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
very nice and well written >>phantom poet<< |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, this really does show your love for poetry and the ones who write it....and also your love for Passions. I also would like you to tell your mothy friend thank you for me. This was beautiful. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'll be back................ How long have I been dreaming I could make it right ... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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their words sustain my soul and the tiniest, most miniscule thoughts were planted in my brain because of their words which someone did not leave unheard but rather, read and enjoyed, even if only by One… that One person captured a piece of the writer, the poet, the author that One person went away or stayed because of that writer, poet, author and forevermore shall remember or if not actually remember, still, will have been touched, just once by the Passion of the Person, Poet, Painter of Promise. ========================================= thank you me dear poetess of the sun Had to do some serious file hunting to find something for you...had forgotten all about this one till you touched a memory ~Archives Of The Heart~ Doors may close ... songs may end ... still, we hear the love's refrain. For a while we danced in the light, and those memories will remain. Winds of change may carry us on ... yet we are held by the ties that bind. We were witness to a miracle ... and the unending gifts of "traces left behind." Some things we just shouldn't question, some things weren't meant for us to understand. In the end the answers really don't matter ... just remember, you'll always hold my heart in your hand. Pages turn as another chapter comes to a close, still these "moments in time" will never impart. The promises kept ... now engraved in rhyme ... and both the love and memories are archived in our hearts. JM 11/4/00 Looking Into You ~Jackson Browne~ Well we spoke of the changes that would find us farther on And it left me so warm and so high But as I stepped back outside to the grey morning sun I heard that highway whisper and sigh Are you ready to fly? The great "poet traveler" passed through here And he opened my eyes to the view And I was among those who called him a prophet And I asked him what was true Until the distance had shown how the road remains alone Now I'm looking in my life for a truth that is my own Well I looked into the sky for my anthem And the words and the music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you -- and that's true How long have I been dreaming I could make it right ... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh....this one really touched my heart.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love the archives... so many treasures are there, just waiting for our attention to treat us once again. *S* Excellent work, Sunshine! *S* |
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