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Open Poetry #25

He is.

sweetwater
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since 2002-12-16

Posts 178
Perth

0 posted 2003-03-03 03:57 PM

He is love
I saw it straight away
In the darkness of the night
Then again, in light of day.

He is love
We fit as one complete
A natural arrangement
so simple and so sweet

He is love
No matter what will be
Through pain and sorrow and whatever the ‘morrow
He is love
to me.

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-03-03 04:23 PM

beautiful !

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-03-03 04:45 PM

So romantic. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

3 posted 2003-03-03 04:52 PM

great work

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

4 posted 2003-03-03 05:12 PM

I liked this very much.

Hugs, Marti

Dwelling on the negative simply
contributes to its power.
Shirley MacLaine

sweetwater
Member

since 2002-12-16

Posts 178
Perth

5 posted 2003-03-03 05:17 PM

thankyou all for reading and enjoying.. I have never written a romantic poem before so I'm happy it was coherant and likable... cheers T

Phantom Poet
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since 2003-03-03

Posts 116
Arizona USA

6 posted 2003-03-03 05:32 PM

Good writing romantics are always nice to read

sweetwater
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since 2002-12-16

Posts 178
Perth

7 posted 2003-03-03 09:28 PM

and oh I just realised that I didn't put one of those little book thingos on this piece... is it too late now?

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