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Rainy Day |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Dark clouds rolls by slowly Within time When time came It came And brought rain over here It was a stormy weather Today When the rain did pour us a love A love That surrounds our heart With each time And power of love When here Today It Is rainy day A rain that brought us Into song All the way It will go on and on When It will take time To get over it But my heart Is still on This every day Rainy day...... [This message has been edited by vandana (02-14-2003 08:21 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - beautiful is this rainy day of yours... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Vandana, and I must tell you how much I enjoyed this great write! Rain is a favorite theme for me, as I grew up in a rain area. But this encompasses both rain and love, and does it beautifully too. Thank you for sharing it with us! A truly happy person is one who |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! I enjoyed this! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Isn't it something that we can be on opposite ends of the world and yet the rain comes just as hard! *hugs* for that.  We got close to eight inches yesterday, a California kind of flooding, but it was so good...and muddy!Enjoyed your poem vandana~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, I liked the way you described the rain and love, too. Just beautiful.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
I always say...you never know what may happen in the rain. Rain can be a beautiful thing if you let it. Romantic! Thank you....... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice work..captures the drift of a rainy day..the drift of purpose..the drift of dream... I enjoyed |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
I love this flow of this poem - speaks very softly of a rainy day - enjoyed this poem! CD |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Made me think of the song "Rhythm of the Falling Rain"...enjoyed...James |
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Quiet Acquiescence Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 70somewhere out here |
I enjoyed this poem. The way you transitioned from rain to love and back to rain is done very well, I think. It all made sense and it was easy to follow. Nice work. ~*~me~*~ "Remember, courage is wings." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Nicely done.........enjoyed Charisma |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 A beautiful way to bring a refreshing cleansing thought to all of us! Thank you. enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very refreshing..I too love rainy days. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I flourish in gray of day, and melt in the bright of sun. But then, I'm odd. I really like this write.  |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
I enjoyed this very much!  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
vandana - I liked this a lot - stranglet enough - rain makes me feel good - like rebirth - the smell of grass and just NEW in the air -this was sad but lovely xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I'm glad this came back up! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Vandana, this is very beautiful ..... you and your love became the song of the rain ... a flow of freshness and renewal. Love, Margherita |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice *s M |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Vandana, it's raining here today and it's the perfect day to read and write poems. Enjoyed ... hugs for peace, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
A vote from this rain lover living in the desert. Nice! |
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