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Martie

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California

0 posted 2003-03-02 01:23 PM

   Heart-spring Bent

All wrapped up
this sunshine is taking every tree
and fish
drop up like backwards rain on pond
their pout
a dimple dropped but from below
and crow
in lively walk on wire
dips attitude in sky attire

looking for the place
of meadow    cannot find
the fence bends round
not earth but heart-spring bent

There must be a picnic in the sand
or looking over pier a place
all lather and exploding
to hang my peace

The sweet pea holds the string
though nasturtiums crawl
around about in blink
leaving winter coved within forget
and making from the dying leaves a bed

eclipsed by winter cover of delight
inspired to build sustenance from fright

[This message has been edited by Martie (03-02-2003 02:18 PM).]

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-03-02 01:31 PM

drop up like backwards rain on pond
their pout
a dimple dropped but from below
and crow
in lively walk on wire
dips attitude in sky attire

What a nice attitude...
it is a beautiful day out isn't it?
Your poem suits my mood to a tea.
I'm going to go walk the beach this
afternoon and take it all in.

Hugs Martie~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-03-02 01:35 PM

"There must be a picnic in the sand
or looking over pier a place
all lather and exploding
to hang my peace"
------------------------------------------
Beautiful Martie....love these above lines especially.

~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2003-03-02 02:41 PM

and crow
in lively walk on wire
dips attitude in sky attire
==============================

I do so love the way you mind works!!

Ask the stars all that I wish for
and they will tell you true ...

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-03-02 02:50 PM

Martie...you're making me
homesick again
for nasty-tursiums...

thank you!

Martie

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5 posted 2003-03-02 02:57 PM

Lori...I want to go with you!

Thanks, Nancy, and hugs back!

Janet Marie..Crows do have an attitude! Loveya, girley!

Karilea...I call them Nasti-urchins. Yep, they are going nuts right now..I'll send you a pic.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

6 posted 2003-03-02 03:29 PM

It is amazing the way your mind frolics among these deep and heartfelt thoughts.
Like bluebells on the tips of shoelaces

TD

Martie

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7 posted 2003-03-02 03:34 PM

TD...sometimes the things you say just blow me away..like now.

Ratleader

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8 posted 2003-03-02 05:56 PM

Martie, if you keep this up, you will create your own language....

And it will be a language of tenderness and love, with no tenses in it -- past, present, future, all one -- pastpresentfuturebecoming perfect.

This one so, well, so internal -- as if instead of reading the words, we've been invited to see your thoughts with you as you think them.....

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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-03-02 10:55 PM

"The sweet pea holds the string
though nasturtiums crawl
around about in blink
leaving winter coved within forget
and making from the dying leaves a bed

eclipsed by winter cover of delight
inspired to build sustenance from fright"

(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Martie, I always love how your words skip and jubilantly leap across the pages, I wish I could go to the beach right now but I live a thousand miles from it!

(big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

10 posted 2003-03-03 10:19 AM

Martie - your writing touches us like the laughter of the clouds ans sun as s new season wafts over us - we here in the mid-east still are deep DEEP in winter and envy you!!! Paul

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2003-03-03 10:25 AM

Martie
I too love the way your mind works.

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