Open Poetry #25 |
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I'm Alive |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA ![]() |
When your lips Sweep across mine With fury of passion I feel alive When you caress My face And stare Deep into my eyes I feel alive Every time you say, "You're beautiful. I love you." I feel alive When we hold each other Late at night And act like We never want to let go Of each other I feel alive When we make love And we feel Like we could never Stop I feel alive I'm alive Because of your love My sweet Charming Prince Cold hands means a warm heart |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
its good to live, isn't it ![]() beautiful Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful! Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Makes me feel alive |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I love you Julie. ![]() What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Julie, the key image to this lovely piece was "I feel alive"... realism, acquired. Good! Very good! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-02-2003 06:42 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Julie... Love the feeling also. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes that's the secret to feel alive ... someone to share this life with ... beautiful. Margherita |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) I too know this feeling, dearest friend, and I long ever so much to feel this way for real with a love who will really want to be with me! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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