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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-01 11:58 PM

Do You Feel It?

there is an ache
so deep inside of me
that no word
in any vocabulary
can express it
it is a warm freeze
with lightening speed
that motivates
as well as arrest
a word no journalist
from any emotional language
could scribe
do you feel it?
the depth deeper than
any empty echo
clamoring to edges
fighting to be heard
where it’s voice
screams and whispers
leaving you full and empty
do you feel it?
do you?

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2003-03-02 12:14 PM

Yes, I do believe I do feel that ache.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-03-02 12:20 PM

I feel it in me, too.
Thank you for helping me know what it is I'm feeling.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-03-02 02:08 AM

you know I do

leighsa
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America

4 posted 2003-03-02 03:58 AM

I really liked the poem...
check out my poems under reflections and poems# 25 they are called ONE ans A HERO
Ashgiel
age 14

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

5 posted 2003-03-02 03:08 PM

do you feel it?
do you?

Yes
like a storm building on the horizon and the sweet smell of rain just before the drops began to fall

Thomas

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-03-02 08:07 PM

enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-03-02 09:38 PM

(big hugggssssss) Yes, I do know that ache and I too just can't describe it in its entirety and give a word for it! (sad sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, God Bless You, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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