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Just a Note.....
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Just a Note..... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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Just a note to say I love you Just a note to say I care There is no one else above you anywhere that can compare.. Just a note to say I need you more than you will ever know. Matters not where life may lead you or impede you I will go... I just wanted to take the time to say how the thought of you brightens up my day through the hassle and scurry of lives in a hurry we sometimes forget to relate that the love that we feel remains true and real through everything - isn't that great!? Just a note to say I miss you That is all I have to say... so I love you, I miss you, I need you, I want you, I think of your love every day It's just a note... is that ok? |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Balladeer - Love this!! My hubby leaves me a little note on the table each morning before he leaves for work. Sometimes they only say "I love you", and still, it makes my heart skip a beat. Enjoyed thoroughly. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Bravo,,, She will like that kind of note. I know i am taking note of this note.  bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
just a note dear Deer???......you just melt my heart  Charisma |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's definitely ok, Deer One... but didn't you mean to send it to me via email??? LOL Seriously, it's wonderful... makes me wistful. *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhh...I love this so much, sweet friend, it may just be anote but it sings with all the love you have to give in your golden heart! (big hugggssssss) May you and your love forever share a lifetime of happiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
’Deer hi there, YES! I got to you first, sorry I’m a little over excited again, this is lovely writing, smoothly flawlessly executed. YOU do have a wonderful way of conversing with the inner soul, truly remarkable. Hey mum, I got here first so that means I get the note first, possession is 9 / 10 of the law Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
is that OK???? Is SPAM made from Ham???? (dont answer that) somethings are better left unknown (hehe) Youre adorable when youre wearing your heart on your sleeve. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well now there you go, leaving a note out in the wide open for all the ladies to find and say, "it's mine! it's mine!" Nevertheless, a good write...you always seem to have something to say, and find just the right way to phrase it! Well done, Balladeer! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Why Balladeer!! Showing your softer side here and I like it! You can drop me a note anytime. Enjoyed much. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a note that melts the heart....so romantic and so you, sweet Balladeer...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ Works for me !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
And seeing that there is a need for a response here, I thought I would do one in kind, as Kit did before on one of your other poems... You'll find it... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda reminds me of a song |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
’Deer dearest heart, excuse me a moment while I wrest the note from my darling daughter’s hot little hands. Sorry I don’t mean to start a scrap but I may just have to. Yet again my abominable daughter beats me to the prize. Sorry where was I? YES this is lovely an utter delight I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. Now darling girl what was that about possession being 9/10 of the law? I have the note and you haven’t This is as always an utterly utterly fantastic flawlessly penned wonder and I love it    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I really enjoyed this, Michael...Its a great idea to remind our loved ones, every once in a while so that no one will get taken for granted......I really liked the shape of this poem also...Did you shape it like a downward arrow on purpose?  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
GIWIWT I love it! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
If she turns this note down, I'll take it. LOL.. great write Baladeer. floria Floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice note, I would be happy to get one such as this Sandra |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sweet Balladeer: I want a note like that...can I have it? Please???? |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
nightshade...sounds like a wonderful marriage! My congrats!! bslicker...you reply is well-noted  Charisma...that's because you have such a soft heart  suthern...you KNOW our e-mails are hotter than this! Thank you, your wistfulness Noah...your responses are always noteworthy! Thank you, sir |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Krissy..seems like the early bird has caught this worm for sure! I thank you Janet Marie..Spam is not made...Spam just IS! Sunshine...you see everything, don't you? Enchantress...I try to keep that soft side well hidden. Sometimes it just sneaks out Startime..you sweet lady! You are definitely worth noting  |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge...I'm sure it does! Your life should be filled with notes and Bills! Soleil..I love responses...eyes are peeled passing shadows...good. I wrote it as one Marsha...you are notably aggressive there. Aren't mothers supposed to sacrifice for their duaghters? Is that child abuse? Madame...actually..no! Some things just end on a down note, I guess! Glad you enjoyed |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
interloper...those letters say it all. I thank you, sir strbbux..you are ALWAYS noteworthy! Sandra...you deserve one...and much more Martie...a note? You can have a book!!! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this is a beautiful piece of writing and i'm very sure it was so very special to your lady "just a note"? ......just a poem? it's a beautiful note to receive...... a song...... it's all the notes combined fine writing, my friend |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Mine doesnt leave a note but he makes me coffee the night before so all i have to do is flick the switch aha..does that count ~Vic |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now if I had seen even a note with half that in it perhaps I would still be married, all he left me was bills  Great write Balladeer. ~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Balladeer, Awwwwww.. *sighs* there is nothing more wonderful and romantic than little love notes Very sweet.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
'Just a note' is so neat here I'm all smiles - ear to ear How did ya know what I wanted to hear Oh...that's why HE made our Balladeer Thanks for the cheer, dear one, I like it... |
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