Open Poetry #19 |
Simonized Moon |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Simonized Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Shine of light upon a velveteen sky Poetic hearts in gentle sigh Simonized Moon of brightest glow sending love's light to all lovers below Caught in soft rays of a monthly phase sending illumination in brightly-lit blaze Oh Simonized Moon how you do shine showering us with love-light divine As I look out a window tonight I'll see you and I'll smile with sheer delight~ *Thanks to SEA~ for reminding me to honor the LunaLady~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ya know, I got a telescope for christmas,. and the night before last I looked at the moon....it's so amazing to see.....I can't wait till tonight! LOVE this Marge |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Shine of light upon a velveteen sky Poetic hearts in gentle sigh Simonized Moon of brightest glow =========================== only you could come up with "Simonized Moon" last night was one of the most amazing moon glows Ive seen...we had snow blowing and reflecting the light and there were smoky clouds passing in front of the full moon which was very low... first it was yellow...as it rose it turned the purest white glow...I froze something I needed off, out there taking pics...but it was worth it. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lovely write Marge~ I cant wait to see the moon tonight.... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
The moon and stars hold a special place in the hearts of romantics and poets...and being both you paint a picure so well. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was busy trying to control the fireworks inside (my heating unit picked last night to blow up.... stinkola and fanny-freezing! LOL) so I missed the moon until this morning... and then I relished every traffic light that gave me opportunity to wait and gape. *S* It was so lovely... even as it the sun rose to steal its glory. *S* I love your moon poems, Marge... and this is no exception. *S* |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Margie girl this is beautiful, one day far into the future I might make a shape like this, but even if I did it wouldn’t be as wonderful as this. YOU are an inspiring and unique soul thank you for this special treat Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Nice read, enjoyed thanks for the reminder. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge as always BEAUTIFUL !! Charisma |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Mine has been Turtle-waxed as of late but I'm glad yours is shinin', lady! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Thankee girlie~ You inspired me to reach for the LunaLady~ Keep that telescope handy ... she's gonna be a beauty~ JanetMarie~ Tee-Hee ... Me little 'moonie-muse' found it ! LOL @ 'I froze something I needed off'~ GreenEyes~ She promises to glow in all her nightly splendor~ Thanks gal~ Dan~ Awwww ... thank you so much~ SuthernGal~ You tickle me~ Be sure to get your fanny next to a warm window tonight~ Krissy~ YES ! ! ! ! Now that's what I wanted to hear ! If I can 'inspire' you ... my day will be complete ! Seymour~ Anytime sweetie pie~ Charisma~ As always ... I appreciate your sweet reply~ Balladeer~ LOL~ Well .. your shine is canned ... but glowing still~ *Moon Hugs* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
I saw that moon cross my path thought I'd do a little math see how many poems would fly to greet the moon up in her sky counted the stars in the Milky Way still more poems said her say and she winks and grins at me then invites all for wine and cheese I saw that moon cross my path thought I'd do a little math... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: A lovely tribute to the full moon, which we are really enjoying (even though it is shining on SNOW!) Betty Lou Hebert |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
I've never been waxed however I shine brightly how could I not shine when you write beautiful words causing me to swell in pride Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!! I love it!!! I Love it!!!But you knew I would...Absolutely stunning. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SoleilNoir~ LOVE your poetic reply~ My math's lousy ... but that cheese sounds good~ BettyLou~ Then you've been 'double-simonized'~ Thank you sweets~ LunaTic~ Knew you'd show you always do~ Love how the phasing brings out you~ Tanka you very much~ StarTime~ Of course I did ! ! You tickle me~ *HUGS* to all you moon-watchers~ She's a beaut ! ! ! ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- YES...I saw that moon last night, and it was gorgeous! So much so that I actually pulled out the digital camera and took some pictures of it. I just love that we can all be so far apart, but still share the beauty of the same moon. I'm loving this poem, Marge. It's as gorgeous as the moon was, and it's very uniquely YOU. Janet Marie is right... only YOU could come up with 'Simonized Moon'. Love and hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ My little buddy ... and only you could capture her glow AND her shadow~ Very uniquely YOU~ I'm smiling *big time* that you let me write my thoughts to go with your photo~ Oh, We're just a couple of moonies Flipping the night pages like goonies Traveling along - writing our songs Side by Side~ Oh no ... that's just the way I started out yesterday morning !!!!!! I think I'm gonna have to switch coffee brands~ But ... but ... I'm not here so this must not be me ... and if it's not me ... who's posting on my page ???? LOL ... I'm beginning to sound like my friend Doreen ... cause I'm sure 'cracking myself up' ! Nytol~ ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- ROFLMBO!!!! I was just thinking that you were sounding like doreen too! LOL!! Love ya, doreen! Marge, buddy...you're just too, too funny! I love it...and I love your little song! You're the bestestest! Love and BIG HUGS, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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