Open Poetry #19 |
A(void)(Dance) |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Since Gloom met my challenge...I'll share my other effort at this word play as well..( chuckling) A(void)(Dance) Spin Toes on point Of empty floor Reflecting swirls Of your desire Spin Empty arms formed In imaginary hold Of one no longer there Spin Time forward Time back Memories to be made Now spiral into mind Spin Music now stopped yet spirit moves along Spin Black holed here Unable to escape Pulling always Always in [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (02-27-2002 09:38 AM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ron, I love this one....a keeper for sure.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CpatHair~ 'Spin Empty arms formed In imaginary hold Of one no longer there' I felt circles in this piece~ Most admirable~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
SEA: Thank you for the kind words... just playing with a single word title..and the varuious ways it can reflect different meanings. Gloom did a couple of versions off the same title and form..and did them well! marge: Yes there are circles... and thank you for the nice words...always a pleasure when you drop in. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Nice, enjoyed the read. |
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