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Rocking The Rhyme
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Rocking The Rhyme |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Rocking The Rhyme ~*Marge Tindal*~ Feeling the rhythm rocking the rhyme Poeticizing expression in three-quarter time Reaching for sonnets lost in the briny ink I tried-I tried I honestly think I'd trade all I own for just one taste of sonnetized drink Da-dum~Da dum and then I'm dun Oh, poopie poo it's just no use I'm getting tired of da-dum abuse So I'll just have to be content wondering where the sonnet went If you see it send it home there's no future in a sonnet-on-the-roam Sometimes the pen just does me in Then I'm stuck with what you see Poet ... please send a sonnet to me ! *Obviously overdosed on coffee this morning~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Rofl - I think we have the same problem, Marge. Really, really erratic muses it would seem....LOL Thanks for the early morning smile… maybe you will catch up to your sonnet soon – lord knows any type of form poetry would be a find for me right now. Michael |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ Eratic is good~ My muses are constantly at work ... they just don't Da-Dum well~  Pleasure seeing you, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOL isn't the full moon tonight?!  this is so cute Marge.....  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Cute and clever, enjoyed and  to you.[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (02-27-2002 10:15 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ I think you're right ... I'll have to work on that~ This was a three-minute write that burst to the page~ No rhyme or reason ... well, okay ... a little rhyme~ Seymour~ I needed clever this morning~ Sweet butterfly *kisses* fluttering your way my friend~ Love ya'  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Magnificent...I love the sway of this poem, Marge....Your talent seems to come out and surprise me in the most wonderful ways...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Rocking a rhyme or stonewall the sonnet? Enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Feeling the rhythm rocking the rhyme Poeticizing expression in three-quarter time Reaching for sonnets lost in the briny ink I tried-I tried I honestly think I'd trade all I own for just one taste of sonnetized drink ================================== from someone whos yet to tackle the sonnet... I am just grateful for rhyme of any kind ... and you dear Margie..can rock my rhyme anytime anybody ever tell ya youre groovy *L*  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge...you write smiles..they are much better then sonnets! You rock, yes you do! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ *surprise* is good, yes ? Tee-Hee ... This was just a morning trickle that caught me rhyming in a tickle It jumped right up and caught my eye wrapped me in that same *surprise*~ RSWells~ LOL @ 'stonewall' ... I've got that too! Thanks for the *giggle*~ JanetMarie~ Well, I think once they did call me 'groovy' as a kid~ But I outgrew it so I think my da-dum's really stink~ So if you want to be on a sonnet-strike with me We'll just not give a flip and let the sonneteers flap their lips~ I've lived a lifetime (though shorter than some) and no one has yet to see my Da-Dum~ But someday soon I might show it Tee-Hee-Hee then that'll blow it~ Groovy I'll be forevermore if I find that Da-Dum meter to implore~ Until then you're stuck with me rhyming just the way I do Up and down the pages blue I don't Da-Dum ... and don't give a (you know)~ Martie~ Well, my sis ... if smiles are your thing then I will bring a *giggle* or two To Passions' pages I'll quip and flip and try to be a *smiley* poet don't ya' see~ *I TOLD you all ... it's the overdose ! Can't stop the sillies this morn - OH GOOD .. it's almost NOON~ LOL~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Rocking the rhyme a moment in time got my feet to tappin in two-quarter time. My head is a-bobbing my heart is a-thumping you got my muse singing for me that's just fine I love your musing it's fun and amusing you're one great poet and don't you forget it.   Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FlutterWings~ Now Maggie ... you just made my day ! To inspire a rhyme is what I live for~ Alright sweet poet friend~ *BIG HUGS* Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Margie girl, this is wonderful, I can feel my soul dancing to this, we can rock this joint. Hey let’s PARTY This is delightful my favourite aunt, it has the beat running all the way through it. Yeah! I can feel my hips swaying to this one you really do ROCK!  Love and warm stuff As always Krissy I wub you And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Oh, poopie poo Marge such strong language...laughing I know the feeling....I have gotten half way through a sonnett really liked the way it was going and then run our of gas....made me frustrated enough to say pooie poo (big grin) as always a keeper Marge Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
soooo cute Marge, and as always ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetKrissy~ Sway - you say ? Well that's okay with me We'll rock the night away in rhyming poetry~ And if it's not a sonnet well we'll just hop right on it Doing da Da-Dum until the morning comes~ Dan~ LOL~ Not one of my poetic best phrasing but sometimes the muses get to crazing Trying to bang a sonnet out makes me want to SHOUT ... I DON'T DA-DUM ! Tee-Hee .. thanks for letting me know I'm not alone~  Charisma~ Glad to have you laughing with me sweetie~ *What a hoot I've had with this one~ Thanks my friends~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl I see my abominable daughter has got here before me, which isn’t surprising since she’s be whizzing through here like a cyclone. This is wonderful darling girl utterly utterly wonderful. As Krissy says this has a wonderful tempo flowing threw it. Well done darling heart this is soooooo fabulous Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
LOL Marge...I have been having this problem for a couple of weeks now, Marge... How nice of you to write a lovely poem about it. Maybe your muse is on vacation, enjoying some lovely spot...like the Caribbean!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is a fun read! Even without the sonnet you're missing! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ok, check the postings for a sonnet Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Marge, you need no help from anyone. This is charming, I love it. floria Floria |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
That is too cute! You are hillarious girl! If I see that sonnet I'll make sure to direct it toward home immediately! Of course I'm not sure I would recognize it if it hit me in the face! Loved it dear friend! Hugs Cindi |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ That CHARMING daughter of yours happens to be my DARLING niece ... now you be nice to her !  Thanks gal .. you're sooooo fun ! Lyra~ Oh no ... I don't have a missing muse ... they just don't know how to Da-Dum ! DA-DUMMIES ! .. Tee-Hee-Hee~ BettyLou~ Well ... it was in the coffee I tell ya' ~ InterLoper~ Well ... I'll find it - with all your help~ Floria~ LOL ... glad you enjoyed it~ Cindi~ It happend just that way ... it did ! But, should you corral that critter ... hog tie it ! Those sonnets have been known to kick butt~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*Da DA-DUM-less Poet*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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