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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-02-27 07:42 AM

I walk mountain passage ways,
In the night,
Shunning all the sunny days
In search of a deep cavern,
That’s just right,
A place where I can crawl in
To hide from reality,
Day and night,
Somewhere they will not find me,
Ask me of all my movements,
To spotlight
All my dark thoughts and intents,
Visions that haunt my bad dreams
In the night,
Words that stay in silent screams.
I’m looking for a cavern
Dark as night,
A crypt inside the mountain.

Gloom

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-02-27 08:11 AM

Gloom,
I hope you find what you are looking for, but I doubt it... for as long as you keep writing a light shines in the darkness.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2002-02-27 08:20 AM

Sometimes you can find a cave right in the throes of humanity... You've just have to know it when you see it... Nicely done, PG..

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

3 posted 2002-02-27 09:22 AM

To hide from reality,
Day and night,
Somewhere they will not find me,
Ask me of all my movements,
To spotlight
All my dark thoughts and intents,
Visions that haunt my bad dreams
In the night,
Words that stay in silent screams
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Wonderfull write
Love these lines... so familiar to me

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2002-02-27 09:31 AM

Thank you, Kethy,
I doubt it also, but I am glad my writing
Was good enough for you to respond to
Dark though it may be.

Thank you, Nan,
Perhaps in the side of a Steel Mountain?
Pleased you enjoyed.

Thank you, Zinsser,
You are kind with your praise
Of my humble words.

Gloom

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2002-02-27 09:49 AM

Nice lines in this Gloom... dark but well put together and strong images...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-02-27 06:59 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Aszard, this one really tugged at my heartstrings, I think we all need times where we need privacy and to be alone in our thoughts, but I also deep down that we should only migrate there shortly and move on and embrace the light of hope everywhere! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet freind, this is sad but beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-02-27 07:22 PM

Yes sometimes we feel like just hiding away from life itself, But don't stay away too long gloom, for I would miss your writing, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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