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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-02-26 07:59 PM

Tell-Tale Heart

pressing
fingers to mind
slowly easing, tracing
memory of a kiss, first one
triggering that "tell-tale heart" beat
a mutual force lost
within the taste
of lips

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-26-2002 09:24 PM).]

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-02-26 08:01 PM

This captures a lot of feelings within such
a small creation....Nicely done Wynter...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-02-26 08:06 PM

Very nicely penned Maureen.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

3 posted 2002-02-26 08:24 PM

Maureen

That first kiss always leaves its taste in memory. Good to see you...enjoyed this!

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2002-02-26 08:27 PM

A lovely lip-shaped poem!

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

5 posted 2002-02-26 08:37 PM

I feel the longing to hear this tale ...
and pleased to see you once again.

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

6 posted 2002-02-26 08:40 PM

Beautiful.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-02-26 09:39 PM

nakdthoughts - nicely written with thoughts, as always...

BC

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

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8 posted 2002-02-26 09:42 PM

And who's lips are they haa..nicely done Ms..Naked

hugs

~Vic

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

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FL, USA

9 posted 2002-02-26 09:43 PM

Beautiful!

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2002-02-26 09:44 PM

I like that tell-tale heart beat,
and the forces that go with it.

Great lines Maureen~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-26-2002 09:45 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2002-03-03 08:44 AM

Magnus, yes a kiss holds all feelings for me. Sorry it took me so long to find this wasn't responded to.*s

Nancy, Thanks

Martie, Thank you.. I don't know  why a kiss has so much power for me...*s

Poet deVine, thank you I never thought it  shaped like lips.*s

Craig, good to see you too..always  alonging. Been longing too long *s

Thank you walker.

Bill..hope you are ok...thanks
hugs
M

Victoria, no ones lips..just a phantom in disguise..

Silver Streak..smiling a thanks

BluesSerenade ..lots of force I feel when kissed..if done properly, melts me.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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