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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-02-26 09:06 AM

“Off with her head!”
Mad Queen declares
No rivals allowed.

Yet reading the lines
Or between

Tells me even Alice
Would be the only one

No mad tea party
Makes the mirror images
Different

But once we have jumped
Through the hole
Our reflections change

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-02-26 09:07 AM

Your wrapped this up tight, and quite well...

So good to see you back!

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

2 posted 2002-02-26 09:19 AM

As she was posting on the blue
"How clever", Alice thought of you.
Her head on tight, in fact in towel,
She's in between her lines of now.

"You rival her", this Alice smiled,
Declared she with a heart beguiled.

Read me if and when you choose,
through the cracks, but don't confuse
the matter dear, I'm party prone
masked here waiting, all alone.

*s ~A~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2002-02-26 09:32 AM

Sunshine: Nice to be back... for at least a while. Thanks for the nice words

Alice:

Mad Hatter's Cheshire Grin
leaves one wondering what's within
Mirror reversed the image there
Wondering if indeed a soul would bare

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

4 posted 2002-02-26 11:03 AM

Sometimes I'm Mad and madder still
for lost my hat upon the hill
but smile I can when I begin
to bare my soul or my within...

You are a real treat "C"
hugssss..I have missed you, too.
~A~

[This message has been edited by Alicethruglass (02-26-2002 09:28 PM).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-02-26 01:35 PM

How interesting. Always something to think about.
Sandra

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2002-02-26 01:37 PM

Then, it is probably best not to jump into wabbit holes

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-02-26 03:23 PM

But once we have jumped
Through the hole
Our reflections change

I really enjoyed this one, Cpat...I don't know your intended meaning, but I interpreted it as going from this life to the next...if there really is such a thing!

the poem was so very well written and so very thought provoking too!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-02-26 04:22 PM

Excellent write Ron! Enjoyed muchly by this fan of Cpat Hair! You had better stick around for awhile! You have been missed.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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