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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-25 05:29 PM

Uncomfortable Fit

how do I
go about starting
my new future
I think
as I mull over
my past
it is not
so much
that I am unhappy
it is more
that the fit
is uncomfortable
I can’t decide
if the size
is too snug
in its newness
or if it
flops around
too big
seems as if
with every turn
in the mirror
I see
something different

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

1 posted 2002-02-25 06:01 PM

sometimes you have to wear a pair of shoes just for a bit before they feel a part of you : ) as always great write.....

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-02-25 06:10 PM

That's because some things ARE a little snug and others are a little loose. You will "grow" into them

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

3 posted 2002-02-25 06:48 PM

h
Oh, those rascally choices!
And I notice something a little different in your poetry here. Not quite sure what it is, but probably attitude, I think. Opening a new door? I like it! Yum, Yum. More, please!
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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-25 07:04 PM

(sigh) Such powerfully emotional thoughts flow from your heart, sweet friend, I believe we all have these thoughts from time to time! (kiss on cheek) Always try fitting into the shoes you believe you can fit into, sweet friend, and you will find yourself treading on a future of much joy and promise for you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-02-25 07:41 PM

May your future be the perfect fit 1slicklady. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Contabo
Member

since 2001-11-21

Posts 159

6 posted 2002-02-25 08:52 PM

I am now thinking of a pair of jeans that in the morning are tight to fit me....but by the end of days they are perfect fit.

Contabo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2002-03-02 02:43 PM

wonderful way of putting it! I love it!

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