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Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-02-25 10:53 AM

Some days
Cloud piled skies
Leave shadows chasing
Through green fields
Alive with sway of stem
And hum of summer

Such passing day
We lay side by side
Counting shapes
Letting tall stalks
Hide nakedness
From worldly eyes.

Sweat mingled musk
As laughter broke
From lips once sealed
With mine

Some days
I would play again
Those times

Some days
The shadows chase me
And I run

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-02-25 10:56 AM

Goodness......this touches deep and gentle

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-02-25 11:07 AM

Just wanted to say....I love this!
So nice to be reading you again.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-02-25 11:08 AM

Some days
I would play again
Those times

Some days
The shadows chase me
And I run

Memories are like that, yes they are.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2002-02-25 11:11 AM

Sea: Thank you dear one... glad you enjoyed. I have read many of your posts of late, and have to say you only get better as time goes on.

Nancy: Thank you... I hope you enjoyed... nice as well for me to be able to visit again and read your words and those of the other wonderful poets on this board.

Duncan: yes memories are like that... some days you chase them and other days or night they chase you.. Thanks for commenting.

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (02-25-2002 02:03 PM).]

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

5 posted 2002-02-25 02:07 PM

And who said farm boys were not romantic...and poetic. Excellent. Bob

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2002-02-25 02:17 PM

Thanks Bob... nice words coming from a man I respect so for his ability to put together the words so seamlessly.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2002-02-25 02:46 PM

Sweat mingled musk
As laughter broke
From lips once sealed
With mine
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well thats an image with impact and impress

some memories are engraved...or burned on us...we cant run from them...some we wouldnt if we could.
as always...a tight write from you...imagery rich and not a word wasted.
well done Poet Capt.
jm

"Never made it as a wise man
couldn't cut it as a poor man stealin
Tired of livin like a blind man
sick of sight without a sense of feelin"

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2002-02-25 02:58 PM

Thank for the nice words JM... kind indeed of you to say such nice things...

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

9 posted 2002-02-25 04:08 PM

Cpat

You touch this piece of life so gently in recall..it is like a sigh.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

10 posted 2002-02-25 04:10 PM

Thank you Martie... Your kind words are appreciated greatly..

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2002-02-25 05:28 PM

The imagery doesn't get much better than this, but quit running, unless your running back here to post ... more!

please?

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

12 posted 2002-02-25 06:23 PM

Sunshine: Thanks for the nice words! As for running... we all do at times don't we?

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

13 posted 2002-03-02 04:18 PM

well you know i had to stop at this one...glad I did, made me smile!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

14 posted 2002-03-02 05:32 PM

A big impact just graced with gentleness. This I love, into the library.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

15 posted 2002-03-02 05:41 PM

(big huggsssssss) Ooohhhhh...this is wonderful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always so soothing and wonderful! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!