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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-02-27 10:17 PM

Snow Quest

So give me a reason to shine
and I will give you life
and love and reasons
to live again and
live on in all
of memory
eternity
is yours

and another gift you might
bring to me is snow and
more snow and then
one more crystal
flake so that I
might bright
the world
today

see

I
can
make the
grayest day
shine in the love
of light if you were
to just listen and think
"why, I can give her snow
if only in a crystal water ball”

I
will
then do
impossible
and cause lots
of smiles to crease
your face with embrace
of the warm, warm scene
of snow under sunlit dreams

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-27 10:22 PM

"I
can
make the
grayest day
shine in the love
of light if you were
to just listen and think
"why, I can give her snow
if only in a crystal water ball”

(smiles) Oohhhhhhh...this was my favorite line, your entire poem is beautiful! (kiss on cheek) May you forever cast snow angels with your love on the fields of love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-27-2002 10:22 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2002-02-27 10:39 PM

OH yes!
Give me a reason to shine!
You're handle suits you so well!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-02-27 10:44 PM

Karilea, this is wonderful ! I love snow globes and now I love this piece. I am collecting yours you know?

Love the presentation on this as well. Thanks for the smiles tonight!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

4 posted 2002-02-27 10:51 PM

Karilea - Reading this caused a smile to crease my face.

Nicely done.

Dave

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2002-02-28 06:03 PM

~* This is sent with love *~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2002-02-28 06:05 PM

How beautiful, this thought of words, dear Sunshine.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-02-28 06:38 PM

Love that falls in flakes
in the globe which shakes
such a pituresque scene
with nature's touch serene.

Nice poem KJ. very nice.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-02-28 06:40 PM

The poem so lovely tne structure so original and nice. love this sunshine. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

9 posted 2002-03-02 06:54 AM

I
will
then do
impossible
and cause lots
of smiles to crease
your face with embrace
of the warm, warm scene
of snow under sunlit dreams

You always do ...

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2002-03-02 07:03 AM

Karilea-
Wow...this is gorgeous, and definitely one
of my favorites from your pen.
I absolutely LOVE it!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2002-03-02 08:33 AM

Wow! I like the way you did this. This is just beautiful, Sunshine.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

12 posted 2002-03-02 06:24 PM

Loved this Karilea. The presentation is beautiful.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

13 posted 2002-03-02 06:33 PM

I'm just jealous because you have a muse that's working. This is just beautiful.

Oh well, mine wants to work, but I had to put her in the freezer for a while.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

14 posted 2002-03-02 10:14 PM

You don't need a reason to shine.. You just do...

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