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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Lush palm trees sway under the moon the ocean glows in crystal kiss I walk with knowledge it is soon he comes to me, return to bliss. Awash in sweet plumeria I feel my heart beat as a drum the birds are sharing arias I sip of life's fruit flavored rum. The time is now, I hear him sing I do not dance in lonliness our hands rejoin, together cling he glides wth me in love's caress. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
 this is absolutely perfect...so very romantic and filled with sensuality...I love it...I love it...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very alluring poem, Sandra!  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always lights these pages! (kiss on cheek) May the love of your dreams sweep you away to paradise, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon youy! Love, Noah Eaton |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
"bump" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The plumeria is my favorite flower, something about the fragrance and how it blends with the romance in the air. I really liked the tropical flavor in this. Nice going Sandra~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - a flower in your hair, a moonlit night, Caribbean flavor, reggae, and a lovely poem... BC |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah.... paradise.... nicely done my friend...and it built in me a desire for warmth..and sharing the sun with another.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, Good write, enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra, this is perfectly beautiful.... Sounds sooo inviting too! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sandra - sweet poetess, I love this, makes me long for one of those tall, cool drinks with the little, paper umbrella's topping it off. hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Catalina I cannot tell you how very much I love this verse. "Awash in sweet plumeria I feel my heart beat as a drum the birds are sharing arias I sip of life's fruit flavored rum." It is simply beautiful. floria Floria |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is alluring catalinamoon...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh this was simply delightful, I needed a sunny poem and there you were! ~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sandra, the birds are sharing arias I sip of life's fruit flavored rum. I send you palm trees from Florida. ((Sandra)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i can smell the fragrance of the plumeria ...makes me wish i was in Hawaii again......nicely penned hon.. hugsss ~Vic |
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Hopefloats Junior Member
since 2001-10-30
Posts 26NH |
Sandra this makes me want to take my man to a secluded place....your writings are filled with such emotion, and "maybe" with the right man, we could double-date......I keep hoping for you!!!! Loved it hon.....  D |
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