Open Poetry #19 |
Out There |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Out There By: Noah Eaton 2/28/02 I wanted To be somebody other like you You wrapped your heart in bobbin lace Trying to weave a parquetry of memories I thought that It was hopeless Then you reached your hand out And showed me the way Your photographs Are all I have now You are all I want I want you to be my souvenir It’s not easy It shouldn’t be so hard How can I make you mine? There has to be some destiny between you and me… If I had the chance to I would hold you Hand in hand We’ll fly away from here It is so cold outside And all you need is someone to care Somehow I’ll wash away your tears And find you out there I feel weary I wish you were there to hold me Deep inside me I find myself keep hanging on I need you badly Without you my heart just bleeds Answer the phone I need your company If I had the chance to I would hold you Hand in hand We’ll fly away from here It is so cold outside And all you need is someone to care Somehow I’ll wash away your tears And find you out there Reach me I have waited so long Reach me Without you, it’s hard to carry on If I had the chance to I would hold you Hand in hand We’ll fly away from here It is so cold outside And all you need is someone to care Somehow I’ll wash away your tears Will you find me standing out there… Will you see me standing alone out there… Will you find me… [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-28-2002 11:07 AM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
It has occured to me that you have commented on most of my poems and I have been sadly lacking in commenting on yours.I will try to mend that.This poem reminds me of the song "People who need poeople".You are truly one of the lucky people. paladin |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Out there you will find each other and hold hands in love and healing while wiping away each others tears...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah, Of course she will find you, your love will light her way!! Wonderful. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Noah, just wanted to say that I read this one twice and love it, got a very sad feeling but also a hopeful one too! nice balance |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
i don't think any woman wants to be a souvenir. She wants to be wanted, not owned The courting should never stop. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
She will find you dear Noah, your love shines so pure and words comes straith from your heart. Very well done!! Charisma |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
She must find you Noah, Love always find the way, Keep writing these beautiful poems and she will appear dear friend. floria Floria |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Noah- Wow this is fanstastic!! I believe this is one of your finest pieces that I've read. I believe that your love will find you and when you do, true happiness will come your way. I wish you all the best my sweet friend. And yes keep hanging on for sometimes in our darkest moments is when sunshine is peeping right around the corner. Take care. Amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
This is such a lonely, but hopeful piece. Be patient... |
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Hopefloats Junior Member
since 2001-10-30
Posts 26NH |
Ahhhh Noah... love the name..(my grandson is a little Noah!!!) Beautiful words...and may love come knocking on your door soon. So sweet and loving..... |
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