Open Poetry #19 |
Ships In The Night |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Ships In The Night Those best laid plans Are so often derailed Was trying to reach But somehow failed With plan arranging The time never right Once more we pass As ships in the night Creating the outlines Words with my pen A meeting of hearts I wish I knew when Always on my mind My heart being true I wish just one time Promises came true HopeĀ© 2002 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwww, I'm so happy to feel loves promises shining in your heart, sweet friend, may you forever be cradled on the sea of love in his heart and find true happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Noah my dear friend , your reply lights up my day Hope |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
HopeS some nice thoughts here on a special evening that brings back some warm memories. tSR |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks ShadowRider , yes lots of memories I hold , oceans apart , yet remain heart to heart Hope |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Hope So very touching were your words and how very true in many relationships. Life becomes so hectic sometimes but I guess it takes less than a minute to tell someone you love them. This was very well written and so much enjoyed. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Sue for your equally touching reply yes busy lives and different time zones Hope |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hope- Such a tender and touching piece you've penned. Beautifully written, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
May the trade winds blow your love's heart back to you soon. Hope, it's good to see your name on these blue pages. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ships on rails ... now there's a thought Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thanks Interloper Calls for me to sail with train of thought !!! Hope |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Hope; I haven't seen your writing for awhile and I have certainly missed it. Such a tender poem. It is always good to be able to read something you have written. Wishing you love, joy, and happiness. Wanda |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Wanda for your kind reply ,I am here almost daily , in fact I wrote two poems since this one but they seem to have slipped past onto previous pages Hope |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Hope.. this is beautiful. Just keep your eyes on the horizon that ship may show back up. alan |
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