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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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god damn you... I hate my refrain. another day older another day's pain... damn you, g'damn you, as I still remain... no thing left to smolder-- no ash reverse rain. There's nothing, elliptical crayoning me-- there's nothing-- no nothing-- no thing left of me. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karen, powerful write here darlin'. Full of angst and anger. Well done Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
There is power in so little. There can be weakness in over much. Very good. Contabo |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
You can holler at me if it'l help I don't mind  Actually you'd be doing my wife a favor ... her voice is sounding a little horse |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Powerful write.Anytime you want to scream, yell, or holler send it my way. Peaches |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yeah,I know what you mean. Stong stuff, girl. Sandra |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
keep with the serenity  and blow the bad vibes here! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
damn you... god damn you... I hate my refrain. another day older another day's pain... damn you, g'damn you, as I still remain... no thing left to smolder-- no ash reverse rain powerful lyrical angst... some days we curse our own... some days we curse others... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
i'm really feeling this poem! release that anger serenity!! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well damn I like the way you vent! |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
Powerful and intense. I never thought "damning" could be so poetic! Thanks for sharing! Neha |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
aw geez...I have typed out another tirade...thanks all, for tolerating my poetic foot stomping! chuckling, I was a little annoyed when I wrote this...sigh... Thanks again! I feel better now. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
...yikes - don't give me flashbacks like that - thought you were one of my ex's!!!  well - you certainly didn't hold too much back here, did ya karen? *gulp* |
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