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Contabo
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since 2001-11-21

Posts 159

0 posted 2002-02-23 10:16 PM

Shadows

In this season…
deep with long shadows,
into sparrow grass, burnt from Summer,
death bent in frozen stares
at bitter hands craving some perspective
mislaid on this unlawful gloom,
my longing for rescue from Winter’s clutch
choking the hope from me
as I reach for the soft Earth
clawing out of the shadows
into the light of Spring

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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2002-02-23 10:17 PM

its coming its coming...the feel of this poem caught me and held me...nice write

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-23 10:22 PM

(sigh) This is soooooooo emotionally beautiful, sweet friend, spring is just around the corner, I can already feel it! (big huggssssss) We all love you so much, this is spectacular! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Contabo, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Contabo
Member

since 2001-11-21

Posts 159

3 posted 2002-02-23 10:25 PM

I am thanking you for taking time to read and comment.

Contabo

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

4 posted 2002-02-23 10:25 PM

Yet, there's still time for an early candlelight evening!!!!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-02-23 10:54 PM

Nicely written..we are all craving the touch of spring

~Victoria~

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

6 posted 2002-02-23 10:59 PM

''into sparrow grass, burnt from Summer,
death bent in frozen stares
at bitter hands craving some perspective
mislaid on this unlawful gloom,''
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
really enjoyed this writing

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2002-02-23 11:01 PM

very expressive poem Contabo! I enjoy your work to the fullest

Contabo
Member

since 2001-11-21

Posts 159

8 posted 2002-02-24 12:00 PM

I am too tired to write how thankful I am to you.

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