Open Poetry #19 |
Ascent/Descent |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ascent/Descent In darkest sky, so low in east sun breaks night to thus greet winter’s day, now not so bleak thy sun glints gold, new day to seek In blue of heaven, sun casts glow spring begins that all should grow so gentle as a new babe’s sigh loveliest ascension through her sky Comes summer day, sun crowns by casting rainbows all around emerald lush in carpets green vibrant rays, sweet earth’s scene slowly makes way t’ward the west over all sun concedes her best she does not fall, but in slow descends casting promises yet again to rest now in gifts of sigh sun’s descent quits us from high quiet slinks in cool of night tomorrow’s ascent, a promised light 03 January 01 revised 23 February 02 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! This is an outstanding vision of sunrise to sunset, sweet friend, the promise of tomorrows light will always be with us for He promises us the light always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this ascends with beauty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
How do you do this? Michael Auguste~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
sunshine escalates stimulates germination bestows poetic skies |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Sheer radiance!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Brilliant!! ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well...you took the words right out of my mouth to describe this beautiful piece "to rest now in gifts of sigh" Live today like it was your last day on earth! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
How beautiful! This is a keeper Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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