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0 posted 2002-02-23 08:07 PM


Ascent/Descent

In darkest sky, so low in east
sun breaks night to thus greet
winter’s day, now not so bleak
thy sun glints gold, new day to seek

In blue of heaven, sun casts glow
spring begins that all should grow
so gentle as a new babe’s sigh
loveliest ascension through her sky

Comes summer day, sun crowns
by casting rainbows all around
emerald lush in carpets green
vibrant rays, sweet earth’s scene

slowly makes way t’ward the west
over all sun concedes her best
she does not fall, but in slow descends
casting promises yet again

to rest now in gifts of sigh
sun’s descent quits us from high
quiet slinks in cool of night
tomorrow’s ascent, a promised light






03 January 01
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(smiles) YAY!!! This is an outstanding vision of sunrise to sunset, sweet friend, the promise of tomorrows light will always be with us for He promises us the light always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this ascends with beauty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-23 09:19 PM

How do you do this?  

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  
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sunshine escalates
stimulates germination
bestows poetic skies
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Sheer radiance!!!
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5 posted 2002-02-23 11:01 PM

Brilliant!!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
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6 posted 2002-02-24 11:53 PM


Well...you took the words right out of my mouth to describe this beautiful piece

"to rest now in gifts of sigh"

Live today like it was your last day on earth!
  ~* I don't know who said it but they were sure right *~



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7 posted 2002-03-12 12:44 PM


How beautiful!  This is a keeper

Take care,
Melissa~

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it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

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